My sister loves excitement if it’s big or fast or scary.
Spooky rides with monster slides and spiders that are hairy.
It’s hard to find her presents, but I’m sure that this will thrill her.
I snuck into the local zoo and brought home their gorilla.
Hi, my name is Alys Jackson and I'm a poet and writer
based in Adelaide, South Australia.
My work has been published in magazines,
anthologies and online.
My sister loves excitement if it’s big or fast or scary.
Spooky rides with monster slides and spiders that are hairy.
It’s hard to find her presents, but I’m sure that this will thrill her.
I snuck into the local zoo and brought home their gorilla.
Hi Alys
Your sister is very unique. I don’t know any girl who likes scary stories and so.
I liked this poem Alys.
Japleen
Hi Japleen. It’s very silly really. My daughter loves scary stories but I definitely don’t!! Alys😈👀🎃
I feel that you did a good job with this poem as you were able to fit a short story within four lines of poetry. I would love a gorilla as a present as long as it doesn’t harm me and I love excitement. Overall, this was a great poem and I would love to hear more poems from you.
Thank you Chomilka. I will try to write a couple more poems over the Christmas holidays. It’s such fun….Alys 😊
I have a sister too and she’s really scared of spiders but she loves gorillas so this would be the perfect present. I hope. I think that this poem was very good and interesting and I hope that you can continue to write more poems.
Your poor sister, Ranulaka. There are so many spiders in the world!! I think I would be more frightened of meeting a gorilla. I’m glad you enjoyed the poem. Alys 😊
I think the poem is very funny.
I give it 4.5 stars.
Thanks for the thumbs up, Imeth! 😊🌟🌟 It’s nice to know you liked it. Alys